Guided writing

Choice 1

Read these lines:

That Day, the saucers landed. Hundreds of them, golden,
Silent, coming down from the sky like great snowflakes,
And the people of Earth stood and
stared as they descended,
Waiting, dry-mouthed, to find out what waited inside for us
And none of us knowing if we would be here tomorrow
But you didn’t notice because

Continue writing the story, according to your imagination.

Choice two

Read these lines and look at the photo below, then continue the story. Write 10-15 sentences, at least. Or roughly half a page.

In my restless dreams, I see that town… Silent Hill. You promised you’d take me there again some day… but you never did. Well, I’m alone there now, in our special place… waiting for you.

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  1. Choice two…

    In my restless dreams, I see that town… Silent Hill. You promised you’d take me there again some day… but you never did. Well, I’m alone there now, in our special place… waiting for you.

    That town where we met our very first time..
    My thoughts took be back to that day when you were holding my hand, walking slowly, telling jokes. and laughing to every word comes from my mouth. I’ve never being with someone like you, who listen me all day without getting bored rather you enjoy to hear my voice, no matter what I’ve to say..
    That day when you give me hope and I took our relationship as a grant. That day when you told me that I’ve a place in your heart.
    That moment I wish I would be by your side the rest of life.

    Today everything is different, you’re not here, I’m not energetic as I was that day, and not to mention the time is going slowly as the battery of the clock finished and the clock stop working. I’m here now sitting with nostalgia, imagining how it would be being here with you again. My heart is bumping the blood quickly and the temperature of my body got rised when ever I think if I’m loosing you.

    Words can’t be more enough to describe what I’m going through.. write me how you miss me it would heal my heart.

    Gilla

  2. That Day, the saucers landed. Hundreds of them, golden,
    Silent, coming down from the sky like great snowflakes,
    And the people of Earth stood and
    stared as they descended,
    Waiting, dry-mouthed, to find out what waited inside for us
    And none of us knowing if we would be here tomorrow

    But you didn’t notice because you were too busy, playing video games in the basement.
    Everyone around was watching it happen, but few dared to get close.
    Some terrified and some amazed, most people didn’t know what to think.
    It was something most people never thought would happen but right in front of them, aliens set foot on earth.
    They looked almost like octopi but they were 8 feet tall and you could see right through them.
    As the people nearby pulled out their phones and cameras to record the phenomenal creatures,
    they soon found out that they could not be captured in a photo or video.
    Disappointed, people watched as the aliens wandered off into the distance, wondering why they visited our planet.
    As soon as they no longer could be seen by anyone, the saucers took off and where gone forever.
    All you hear are the stories, but you don’t know what to believe because there is no proof.
    Either aliens landed on earth, or all the people who say they witnessed the event are crazy and delusional.
    You will never know…

    Gilla

  3. I didn’t notice that, I wasn’t even thinking of of that. I was just trying to flee from myself and my own thoughts.
    I’m a disgrace to all I know and I’m a sissy, I try to flee from everything that have happen in the few weeks and I just want to die just because of that my love died to them, but every time I try to kill myself it’s like I’m respawning at a checkpoint or some thing. And if I try to tell someone that I can’t die, ether I get a stabbing pain in my heart and can’t get It out of me, or if I get it out and someone can hear it they die. It’s like death came and swooped their. Life away right infront of me.
    But for every time I ”respawn” I can still remember all that I did before I died. But sadly I have surpassed the checkpoint were my love still is, I’m will never see her again.
    Even if I die when they come down here and kill me I will just respawn and it will go on and on and on if I don’t do something about it.
    I have to come up with an idea, something that will prevent them from killing me, but I’m too weak for it, I’m to sad, too weak.
    Im useless, I can never be something to be proud of.
    So I asked my butler if she wanted to flee with me. I knew that she had a crush on me and that she loved me and she would follow me but she said that she would not, she can’t just abandon her masters castle, her master saved her from demons, but the number one reason she would not follow me was that she believed that I could stop them, I don’t know how she thought that but she did.
    And I told her that I was a disgrace for everyone that have ever looked at me, that I’m useless and that I can’t do anything she is the reason that I have been willing to stay at the castle since my love died.
    I can’t do this anymore I can’t stay here, it bring to many memories back, please just follow me and flee.

    Gilla

  4. That Day, the saucers landed. Hundreds of them, golden,
    Silent, coming down from the sky like great snowflakes,
    And the people of Earth stood and
    stared as they descended,
    Waiting, dry-mouthed, to find out what waited inside for us
    And none of us knowing if we would be here tomorrow
    But you didn’t notice because everything was different, it wasn’t like it used to be. The feeling that is running around in your body trying to figure out where we have been placed. You feel the heavy weight on your legs when you take a step and you don’t want to be there, you want to be free and be able to get away from this. You’re looking at the place. This is where you dreamed of to be, but do you really enjoy this now?

    Did you really want this? Now that you’re alone, did you? Do you even want to stay? You ask yourself a couple of questions with words coming from stress and dizziness. It’s just blank, you know that you have lost your mind. Loneliness and blankness, is this what you’ve hidden from me? Is this the secret behind all these stuff that is in my perspective now? Well, I can see it, you understand now why you didn’t take me to this place, and don’t even know why and how you got here.

    You may need some sleep, as you obviously have lost your mind long time ago. But I never told you that you could sleep, I never told you that you will sleep. Because you wanted this, not me. Now you got it. Stop asking questions in your mind and take responsibility for what you wanted. You asked for this. Darkness, distressed buildings and destroyed cars are all around you. Does that describe how you feel? If it did that, congratulations. I calculated you all time before you even visit that place. You don’t understand that I know you. These words are running in your head all the time.

    Stress and being worried all the time, does it feel right? Just wait till you’re outside of your room, where you aren’t safe anymore. But still you can’t say that, but something is forcing you, because you don’t know which people who is around you are like. Maybe you are thinking too much, maybe you are missing something. Your mind is saying “You will know what I meant about this”. But still your body says that you miss the key for the hole, you miss that key that match to this place. But you will once find it, then you will succeed. In my restless dreams, I see that town… Silent Hill. You promised you’d take me there again someday… but you never did. Well, I’m alone there now, in our special place… waiting for you.

    Gilla

  5. In my restless dreams, I see that town… Silent Hill. You promised you’d take me there again someday… but you never did. Well, I’m alone there now, in our special place… waiting for you.

    I can’t stand this place no more, I can hear the chains scrabbling, the wind breaking the windows more and more. My phone is died, so I can’t call I have no idea how I got here only why. I got kidnaped by the gang I used to work for.

    There reason was that you can’t leave if you have signed for them, and I can’t take this anymore seeing innocent people getting killed for some drugs and some money, so I left. I start walking in the first building that I saw; the crazy thing is why they kidnap me and then leaves me alive in nowhere. When I got in to the building it’s so dark that I even can’t see my own legs.

    But I don’t get nothing to lose so I just walk straight in to the dark. From nowhere the lights comes on an there is a chair right there and behind me a man with a gun in his hand comes out telling me to set down before he pulls the trigger. I walk to the chair slowly and sets down, out from a room 5 maybe 6 men comes out, and I directly recognized all of them it was my old boss and his workers.

    I said after all I have done you’re going to kill me because I wanted to start a new life, shut up your puta I am not going to kill you. My whole body cooled down in a sec, but it didn’t take long till he said but he will and Juan his worker took out his weapon and pulled the trigger, and I woke up in my bed so after all it was the dream I got left in.

    Gilla

  6. That Day, the saucers landed. Hundreds of them, golden,
Silent, coming down from the sky like great snowflakes,
And the people of Earth stood and
stared as they descended,
Waiting, dry-mouthed, to find out what waited inside for us
And none of us know if we would be here tomorrow
But you didn’t notice because the excitement was far greater.

    When they touched the ground, it felt like slow motion we didn’t know what was waiting for us; all of us gawking as they walked towards us.
    You could feel the fear that the people had, some people even ran away.

    There was the kid looked like six years old with his Spiderman hat, and Spiderman swinging in his t-shirt. One of the saucers with his golden Armor you couldn’t stare at anything else; it was reflecting so much light that if you stared for too long you would get a headache. He walked towards the kid and as he came closer he reached his hand, surprisingly the kid didn’t run away.

    I got a glimpse of the kid’s eyes those eyes reminded me of someone that is fearless and don’t care what it takes to achieve their goals, those eyes I had when I was younger like a lion waiting to strike.

    There were soldiers aroun, they raised their weapon but didn’t fire. The saucers were just a few centimeters from touching the kid as one of the soldiers emptied his whole magazine however they didn’t do a single scratch to the Saucers.

    It all happened so fast, I didn’t see where the bullets went as if they disappeared right out of thin air. I remember the saucers smiling, the other saucers that were behind him didn’t even move. The saucers hugged the kid, I looked around and saw people looking at the moment as they were shocked. The soldier lowered their weapons, the kid shed tears. One of the saucers that were behind given him of some sort of device the saucers ate it. A few moments later all of us heard a strange voice, people started to panic but the voice said something in these lines. Hello people from, the earth we are saucers from the Andromeda galaxy my name is Atem and we came today to help you because your planet will soon be destroyed by something beyond your knowledge and imagination.

    I couldn’t quite remember what happened later I have some memories from when a ship came down and people from the earth went on it, and later I would wake up in some sort of cell as I looked out I saw Saturn. I had never seen anything as this beautiful.

    Gilla

  7. But you didn’t notice because you were to caught up in the fotball match that was live on the tv. You had been waiting for almost 2 months now, your favourite team was playing against their rivals, while the saucers had landed. Everyone were just standing still, looking at the sausers while noting happened. It was almost like time had froze for a bit. The saucers made a supressed sound while the doors was opening but noone came out of the saucer. Everyone just stood there shook. You were stil watching the match but now it was half-time in the match so you decided to go and grab some soda from the fridge, while you were walking towards the fridge u noticed a strong beam of ligt from outside, it was the police helicopters. You run to your balcony and u see thousands of saucers all over the place. You decided to run outside and check out what was happening. You ran down the stairwell and when you arrive outside you realised that everything was gone. Every saucer was gone. You had no idea of what was going on. Suddenly you hear your alarm and you wake up. It´s 7am and you need to get ready for work. You sat up in the bed and taught about the dream you just had for a while, and now you just have to go up and get ready.

    Gilla

  8. That Day, the saucers landed. Hundreds of them, golden, silent, coming down from the sky like great snowflakes. And the people of Earth stood and stared as they descended, waiting, dry-mouthed, to find out what waited inside for us and none of us knowing if we would be here tomorrow. But you didn’t notice because you were still sleeping, very hungover from last night. The alien invasion served as a better wake up call then your alarm clock, which you had groggily discarded to the ground following its high pitched beeps. At first you didn’t remember that today was the day that humanity would meet what was possibly the most advanced society to the universe. You ripped open the curtains letting the light come flooding in. You see thousands of people lining the streets with military tanks stationed wherever they could fit in. You see a large stage with a golden podium with the president standing behind it. “What the hell is going on” you thought before remembering that today was the day were humanity would talk to the aliens, a civilisation so advanced that they could jump through space lightyears at a time. You were somewhat surprised when you found out that the aliens had nothing better to do than fly to the other side of space just to see a puny civilisation. You decided you better go down onto the street to watch the saucers land. You push your way out your front door and through the crowds and see the golden saucers slowly hover down to the ground. You would think that the most advanced species in the galaxy could land their flying saucers quicker.

    Gilla

  9. In my restless dreams, I see that town… Silent Hill. You promised you’d take me there again some day… but you never did. Well, I’m alone there now, in our special place… waiting for you.

    Even though I’ll forever wait on you in Silent Hill, you always made me feel extremely closed in when I decided to look for you. Sometimes loved when I seen you but always dead when I found you. That’s the beauty about you, you always make me ”wake up”. I know these are merely scribbles of my thoughts but that’s what defines us right?
    Now I have to walk down my halls and constantly be reminded by pictures all over my walls that I couldn’t save you, because I couldn’t sleep at night because.

    Gilla

    1. In my restless dreams, I see that town… Silent Hill. You promised you’d take me there again some day… but you never did. Well, I’m alone there now, in our special place… waiting for you.

      Even though I’ll forever wait on you in Silent Hill, you always made me feel extremely closed in when I decided to look for you. Sometimes loved when I seen you but always dead when I found you. That’s the beauty about you, you always make me ”wake up”. I know these are merely scribbles of my thoughts but that’s what defines us right?
      Now I have to walk down my halls and constantly be reminded by pictures all over my walls that I couldn’t save you, because I couldn’t sleep at night.

      (v2)

      Gilla

  10. In my restless dreams, I see that town… Silent Hill. You promised you’d take me there again someday… but you never did. Well, I’m alone there now, in our special place… waiting for you, I see every-day and every-night that dream, because that town is a part of our relationship, it is the town that we met for the first time and allowed me to fall in love with you after many years of have been single and thought I wouldn’t be in love again with someone. That town changed my life.

    I miss those romantic nights that we have slept Hotel King Edward, and those days we were struggling the economy that didn’t allow us to sleep any hotel in the town, we slept the side of the road without excuses.
    When we were in that town, we had good days and bad days but we stick together, and it’s all about love.

    That town taught me how to love someone without condition.

    Gilla

  11. That day, the saucers landed. Hundreds of them, golden, silent, coming down from the sky like great snowflakes, and the people of Earth stood and
    stared as they descended.
    Waiting, dry-mouthed, to find out what waited inside for us and none of us know if we would be here tomorrow
    But you didn’t notice.

    The air was cool and there was rough wind. You were standing on the edge, the drop down was about 150m

    ~Yᴏᴜ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ɴᴏᴛɪᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ɴᴏᴛɪᴄᴇᴅ ᴀɴʏᴛʜɪɴɢ. Aᴛ ᴛʜɪs ᴘᴏɪɴᴛ, I’ᴍ ᴡᴏʀʀɪᴇᴅ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ, ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ᴜs. I ғᴇᴇʟ ʟɪᴋᴇ ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴀᴡᴀʀᴇ ɪs ᴀɴ ᴇssᴇɴᴛɪᴀʟ ᴘᴀʀᴛ, ᴅᴏɴ’ᴛ ʏᴏᴜ?

    – I guess, but how am I supposed to be more aware? I have always been bad at interacting. But with you guys, I don’t have that problem.

    *In the distance you hear someone whisper*

    ᴵᶠ ʸᵒᵘ ᵈᵒ ᵗʰᶦˢ, ʸᵒᵘ ᵈᵒⁿ’ᵗ ʰᵃᵛᵉ ᵗᵒ ᶦⁿᵗᵉʳᵃᶜᵗ ᵃⁿʸᵐᵒʳᵉ

    – Who’s there?

    *the room is silent*

    ᴶᵘˢᵗ ᵈᵒ ᶦᵗ, ʸᵒᵘ ᵃʳᵉ ʳᵉᵃᵈʸ. ʸᵒᵘ ʰᵃᵛᵉ ⁿᵒ ʳᵉᵃˢᵒⁿ ᵗᵒ ˡᶦᵛᵉ. ʸᵒᵘ ʰᵃᵛᵉ ᶻᵉʳᵒ ᶠʳᶦᵉⁿᵈˢ, ʸᵒᵘʳ ᶜʳᵘˢʰ ᵈᵒᵉˢⁿ’ᵗ ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵏⁿᵒʷ ᵗʰᵃᵗ ʸᵒᵘ ᵉˣᶦˢᵗ. ʸᵒᵘʳ ᶠᵃᵐᶦˡʸ ᵈᶦᵉᵈ. ᵀʰᵃⁿᵏˢ ᵗᵒ ʸᵒᵘ. ᴬˡˡ ᵇᵉᶜᵃᵘˢᵉ ʸᵒᵘ ᶜᵃⁿᵗ ᵗᵃˡᵏ ᵗᵒ ᵖᵉᵒᵖˡᵉ.

    Dᴏɴᴛ ᴅᴏ ɪᴛ! Iғ ᴜ ᴅᴏ ᴛʜɪs, ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴡᴇ ᴀʟsᴏ ᴅɪᴇ.

    ᵂᵉ ᵃʳᵉ ʲᵘˢᵗ ᵐᵃᵈᵉ⁻ᵘᵖ ᵛᵒᶦᶜᵉˢ. ᴬˡˡ ᵇᵉᶜᵃᵘˢᵉ ᵒᶠ ʰᶦˢ ˢᵗᵘᵖᶦᵈ ᵐᵉⁿᵗᵃˡ ᵈᶦˢᵒʳᵈᵉʳ. ᵂᵉ ᵍʳᵉʷ ᵘᵖ ᵗᵒᵍᵉᵗʰᵉʳ, ᵃⁿᵈ ᶦᵗ’ˢ ᵗᶦᵐᵉ ᵗʰᵃᵗ ʷᵉ ᵈᶦᵉ ᵗᵒᵍᵉᵗʰᵉʳ.

    I DID NOT CHOOSE TO HAVE SCHIZOPHRENIA. I NEVER WANTED THIS. YOU CAUSED ME TO BECOME ANTI-SOCIAL. EVERY TIME I TRIED TO TALK TO SOMEONE, YOU WERE THE ONE TO MAKE NOT EVEN TRY. I HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS.

    You jump off the edge. You hear the voices screaming and you hit the ground. Everything goes black.

    You wake up in class and everyone is looking at you. You grab your bag and rush out of the classroom.

    The teacher walks up to your desk. On the desk its written all over.
    ᴵᵗ’ˢ ⁿᵒᵗ ᵒᵛᵉʳ ʸᵉᵗ

    Gilla

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